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Finished playing it and yeah, I hate being forced to bottom. That makes the game unplayable in various situations, I really hope that is fixed and we can be free to choose between topping or bottoming whenever we want

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Weak

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haha lol

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Weak like your submissive bottom ass?

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😳💦

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Will there be an update soon? >.>

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Just a lil repost

Started replaying after all those eons and kinda liking it so far

The only complaint is that the protagonist is way too much of a submissive bottom and that is so frustrating. It would be better if he was more assertive and dominant and we could be free to choose between topping or bottoming

Besides that major issue everything else is fine

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you will like the next update, 
actually if you are a patron this build, there are scenes that mc showing as dominant

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Still it would be better if we the player could be free to decide between topping or bottoming without being forced to do one of those. Its unconfortable

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Even if the new content shows a dominant MC, I'd appreciate it if he is generally more calm and neutral. Him being flustered and acting submissive whenever he sees someone attractive really discourages me from playing

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How does one reach those chests in forest dungeon?I cant get there by pushing up bottom.

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To answer your questions.
But don't bother, the chest is locked. Feels like a middle finger lol.

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you need to get the key first, try reading the walktrough

The key is fully occluded. Is this intentional?

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Really? I didn't know the left side WAS the way to go in, I went through the bush  on the right side, maybe a bug then?

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Gotta say, you really don't need to include time limited costumes to your game. It's just gonna create a drain on resources, esp in the long term and make a bunch of potential costumes be unobtainable to most of the player base.

Leave the gacha stuff out of it, please. If your game is good, people will come back to it. Forcing them out of obligation to shape their lives around it will just cause them to burn out and never return.

Ofc my only gripe is that the rewards are timed exclusives. If you can get them whenever, I wouldn't see a problem with it.

limited items are gonna be available again but not in near patches

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Wait how do I transmute/forge items?

you cant transmute/forge items in the current build, it will be introduced soon in future builds,

Awesome game/vn love the story so far and the characters are good too. It's a very  promising rpg/vn.

Although, I would like to say it's a bit confusing on where to start and there's a glitch with the bonding potion quest is still a good game all in all.

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Can u pls provide error log?

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This game seriously needs more or different proof readers for its English translation. Almost every other line of text needs to be rewritten in its entirety or at the very least it has basic grammatical errors. 

I'm not trying to point this out be mean or anything, but when you have lines like "Rugra's voice got fainted as i go upstair, but i can still hear his words" and "Goddam Mamau, you face is cover up my sight, i cannot read" its hard to appreciate the good qualities of every other aspect of this game.

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i noticed it aswell and my proofreader is always mention about this issue everytime the thing is both my writer and proofreader are very busý individual, especially my proofreader he is been away since january update release due to serve his country and i had no idea either when he gonna make comeback, but if he do, things are gonna be better.

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he is got irritated with the grammatical error but sadly there is nothing he can do rn, and we are chasing for deadline updates so we had to move on. I am sorry. I am pushing myself to make this proj so thè product outcome is not perfect as you expect.

I dont think there is much to be sorry for on your end, so dont feel too bad it. English is a difficult language to grasp and you probably have your hands full with many other aspects of this game. I just expect proofreaders to catch and fix many of the simpler errors without needing much time and effort to do so. I do like this game, so i hope that they can make the time to help you out. ^^

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How does one open a chest in the dungeon?

you can get the key from floor 1 at top left side of the map
more info : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ofPBd0yT0T6XeKH5sVZXbyiRZOFQKd9Kyg-_fhpSIV4/edit?usp=sharing

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how can i redeem these 4 reward?

you should input patreon codes to get those rewards, including patreon only scenes

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Is the "JUNE 2023" code working for anyone? I tried putting the code in and it isn't working. I also try to put a space but you can't put any spaces.

its patreon only code

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Am I the only one who noticed this? 🤣

ngl i was in rush in making this lol, i am gonna re draw this one next update XD

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To be in a rush to make it, it's still pretty good. I wouldnt mind your art style in a VN im planning on making.

I always interested to hear ideas of people plan on making game, especially a fresh new one concept, you can try hit me up on discord, maybe we can talk more about it. #xer3858

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I spent a whole day farming for 2k picnic baskets and exchanged them for the lifeguard set. 

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I feel your pain i did as well 🤣 🤣

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you can load to your previous save files that having 2k+ picnic baskets

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Huh? Where's the apk? It's gone?

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Can anyone else find their flirt ability.  I don't see mine anywhere.

Also where do we get it again?

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Ok so I restarted the game and now it's not Flirt doesn't working on the Ox bandit.

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Do we have a document file for typo report?

please report it to the discord server

if you found bugs please report it to discord server > https://discord.gg/PEfYVND9mb

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Hi, can i have a hint on how to unlock the 2 scenes above lamberts potion scene in the extras section.

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please refer to https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ofPBd0yT0T6XeKH5sVZXbyiRZOFQKd9Kyg-_fhpSIV4/edit?usp=sharing

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I can't get this skin... WHYYYYYY?!

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I can't get this skin...WHYYYYY?!

It is saying that you can get free 100 Picnic Basket if you own Arctic Warrior Equipments (which is obtainable in January 2023 event), not the otherwise. You can no longer get the equipments.

my bad sorry

WAIIIIIIIT.... where is the android version?

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Unfortunately the game version the app installs seems to be a very early build.

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Correct, app shows 0.2.1 only.

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game is updated,

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bug with the quest board, whenever i try clicking on the "bonding potion" icon, it pops up with this error 

the bug occur when u already had the quest on going/finished and then you click the quest icon in quest board again, i will try to fix this next patch

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Hey i have a concern regarding the quest in the Adventure guild: The quest requires you to collect materials from the new dungeon for Lambert, but i don't know which ones specifically since i can't find and talk to Lambert. I presume he's in the Alchemy shop but that one's not in the game anymore for the time being? How am i to complete the quest? I also have two CG sets still locked for the public build (not Sieg's capture and serpent defeat) which i can only believe are unlocked through this quest.

lambert is in district 2, follow the instruction in your side quest tab

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i can date rex ? 

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yes in future, there is affection feature which is much to explore with in future

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I found this, what do I do now?

I'm missing many parts of the text 

thank you for ur report, we will fix that next build

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The build download in the Itch app is busted again. >_>

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intriguing :)


i get my computer new computer up and running and install itch again, what do i discover XD this game is no longer blocked behind a weird password thing and it has a new image on it as well.


never thought i'd see this title active again but kept it stashed in my collection just to be sure, i guess the gamble paid off.

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Hello. And when will the June patch go public here?

hiii, its up now

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There's a bug where my game crashes when I try to equip the fireball skill

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yep same thing happen to me hope it get fix next update since im trying a magic build. Also dont wink at a slime in the slimedunegon lol  they dont like it and crash the game lol.

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Have chinese?

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Hai mei hao, dan wo men nu li zai xia ci geng xin zhong jia ru zhong wen ban ben

Machine translation confuses grammar

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That's why we can communicate, but we can't communicate perfectly.And dear, the Chinese version still can't be find.

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gila ART-nya  maknyuss bwang
lanjutin bang storynya juga enak

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the art in this game is incredibly well drawn, definitely one of the better VNs out there in terms of art quality. the writing, however, could do with some improvement. specifically, the English used in this game is riddled with grammatical errors to the point of being nearly unintelligible. i would highly recommend the developers of the game find someone to go through the story and correct the grammatical errors, as they are seriously hampering the game's immersion and storytelling capability. 

thank you, ive hired a writer

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i've been taking attention to your game since before remastered release, and i must say, Art and Storyline changes have been improved in this one, i almost though you would abandoned this project knowing how long you haven't update this game.

but there is always a room for improvement, especially on the story writing and the code, you might need a proofreader to make sure everything you write in your game is well-structured and grammatically correct.

i have a friend that passionate enough to be in a project as a proofreader, if you happen to have a Facebook, you might consider to talk to the guy

by his permission, i'll share his FB account here so you can reach him if you interested on having a proofreader :

https://www.facebook.com/draqanar.raitannil?comment_id=Y29tbWVudDo5MzM2NTU5MjQ1M...

All and all, i really wish for future update and having another amazing improvement in your project

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thank you, but im not lacking of proofreaders, i had writers and proofreaders enough, what i need is consistency

Is it normal to get error screen if i flirt with Slime?

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你会说中文吗?

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diandian, bu hui xie.
ni hao ma.

ni hao  :)

不要调戏作者了(●'◡'●)

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The game looking amazing so far, but i played on smartphone and the android version is a bit mess

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yep, its a bit mess with all the visual bugs,

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My personal review 'w' (Sorry if my English kinda sucks):

I played this game when it was in a much earlier build and hadn't been reworked and I think the game has very good potential to be good! It's a shame that Lentera isn't as popular or as well known as other RPGs like Tavern of Spear. But hopefully as time goes on when you get more content you'll find more ways to advertise your game and have a bigger community.

With that said I will split my review into sections (Don't take my review to heart and if you disagree then all goods! I would just like to add some personal suggestions):

CONS:

Character development - I feel as though the main character becomes way too well acquainted with both Rugra and Rex. Literally at the beginning Rugra does a very big favor for the main character and continues to be very helpful despite not having any bond or connection with the main character. (It does make Rugra very cute, adorable and caring which I really like though lol) However, it  feels as though Rugra is assuming that the main character from the beginning is a very good boi and his care doesn't feel earnt. The main character also lusts for Rugra and Rex very fast too lol. I would like to see the main character lust for Rugra and Rex but as time goes on they delve into a deeper relationship when they learn secrets about each other. I feel it would be better than faking the whole bond to become best buds off the bat as we as the player have not connected with both Rugra and Rex yet. (I understand not much content with them has been created yet so you still have a lot of room to make a good relationship 'w'!)

Story - Overall, it feels as though the main character isn't really encountering any overarching problems. He has: Free food, a free room, free gear to defend himself with, and free hot daddies. The only problem I can see is that the main character lost his memories but I feel as though he doesn't really have a background and was intended to be this way for the player to immerse themselves into the main character (which can be a good thing!) but from a narrative standpoint the story may become flat if nothing much goes on as the player doesn't have many questions to ask or any mysteries to uncover. I'm not exactly sure what to suggest to add to the story but all I would say is add some more conflict / have consequences to the player's actions (e.g The main character gets tricked by a sexy hunk to go steal valuables for him by pretending to own those valuables and if the main character doesn't have enough agility they get locked into jail or something like that) (and I think the conflict with Rex and the guards is a good start 'w' I think it'd be good to incorporate stat blocks to certain interactions like for example you need 10 intelligence to find out what's on Rex's mind)

Combat - This is what the player will be doing most of the time and the player's stats revolve mainly around combat too and the combat just feels pretty lackluster. When you do an attack you get no SFX or Anim showing you did this attack and it was like this in the previous unreworked build too. Even status effects don't really have any visual indicator. But I do get that the game is still in a very early state but I'd like to see more things to give combat more flair like: Adding quick time events, SFX for special moves, Attack animations, Camera shaking from getting hit, Special screens when inflicted with status effects (e.g red slime being stuck on the screen, red streaks and warning sound when low health), Character expressions when low or very horny during battle. All of these added up can really improve the combat aspect of the game even though they seem small. On an additional note: I would like to see more fun mechanics like special puzzles you can do in the dungeons or special stat requirements that lead to treasure or secret endings. So far the dungeons just feel kind of bland as there really isn't much to do there but fight. There is no hidden lore or secrets or special items you can use that you've found to open up hidden parts of the dungeon. It's just kill the enemies then kill the boss and you're done which I don't find very fun but given some time and tweaking it can become fun! 'w'

PROS:

Character Designs / Art - Wow, the art is really good! I really like the character designs (especially Rugra because he's really cute) and I'm happy that the characters are buff too lol. The art isn't the best in the world but it does the job well and I like the pec close up drawings lol. The only thing I would suggest is more facial expressions. I want to have Rugra show more emotions. Have him be confused, conflicted, surprised by your horny remarks etc. All of these add flavor and cuteness to your characters and so far I haven't seen many expressions but it's all good!

Game Overs - You nailed the game overs really well. I definitely love the slime game overs. They are my favorite! 'w' The art is very good and the writing for these scenes is really good as well. I hope to see more hypnosis and slime related content in the future! No suggestions this time just keep doing what you've been doing!

Additional suggestions - I would like to see the main character face more stakes in the story. I find that if the situation has high stakes the better the game over will be. For example: Say a bandit leader has kidnapped Rugra and it's the main character's job to save him from getting indoctrinated into becoming a bandit before a certain time frame. However, the player is underleveled and cannot save Rugra right away or needs to do some prequisites to find him (e.g gathering clues as to where the bandit's hideout is via. hiding in a certain spot at a certain time of day) and if the player fails to save Rugra before the deadline then the newly indoctrinated bandit Rugra will kidnap the main character and also make him a bandit. I just find making use of the time system could make for a more interesting situation 'w'

Thank you if you read my whole review 'w' 

thank you for your feedback! yes indeed the story is pretty much flat for now, i should have give more 'hints' about MC in the current story, and at the same time i cannot rush the story, the very first build i spoiled a lot and it turns real bad writing, now i hired a writer and i told em all what really is "lentera" about, why it is called like that, who is the egg figure in the main menu, and blah blah which i cannot tell publicity and just hoping they will understand by time, but they cannot overwork as well so sometimes i did the writing and they will fix what i did so far. nevertheless, i really appreciate your time to give us positive feedbacks.

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Tome of Fireball cannot be accurately equipped in Android build, an exception is thrown citing no image look up pathway. Same type of error as flirting with slime

fixed next update

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when i try using flirt on a red slime an error occures that i could find an image u'char/redslime s1.png

any way to fix that besides avoiding flirting with the slimes?

also i've just finished the game, at least for now, and ive got 2 locked cgs

try to restart your game, slimes are not flirtable opponent, but i might try different approach to avoid this bug next patch

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any guide on transferring saved data without messing up the event page? 

My old save had the last winter equipment from version 1.0. It would be unfortunate  if I had to start over and lose all of them.  

(DONT DELETE YOUR SAVE FILES)

- For Windows, Just replace all the folders, make sure you don't delete your save files so you wont lose your progress since previous patch.

or:

1. Extract your folder 

2. go back to your old lentera version folder, copy "saves" folder, and replace it to the new extracted directory folder one

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thanks a bunch! also, idk if it's a bug or feature but every time i forfeit from slime dungeon is it supposed to make me lose my current gold in inventory? coz I thought doing so strip the gold i get from exploring the dungeon

love the game so far btw especially them moobs (Men's booba) racks so big, make woman feel insecure XD.

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