LENTERA

Unfortunately the game version the app installs seems to be a very early build.

bug with the quest board, whenever i try clicking on the "bonding potion" icon, it pops up with this error 

Hey i have a concern regarding the quest in the Adventure guild: The quest requires you to collect materials from the new dungeon for Lambert, but i don't know which ones specifically since i can't find and talk to Lambert. I presume he's in the Alchemy shop but that one's not in the game anymore for the time being? How am i to complete the quest? I also have two CG sets still locked for the public build (not Sieg's capture and serpent defeat) which i can only believe are unlocked through this quest.

I found this, what do I do now?

I'm missing many parts of the text 

Hello. And when will the June patch go public here?

There's a bug where my game crashes when I try to equip the fireball skill

Have chinese?

the art in this game is incredibly well drawn, definitely one of the better VNs out there in terms of art quality. the writing, however, could do with some improvement. specifically, the English used in this game is riddled with grammatical errors to the point of being nearly unintelligible. i would highly recommend the developers of the game find someone to go through the story and correct the grammatical errors, as they are seriously hampering the game's immersion and storytelling capability. 

i've been taking attention to your game since before remastered release, and i must say, Art and Storyline changes have been improved in this one, i almost though you would abandoned this project knowing how long you haven't update this game.

but there is always a room for improvement, especially on the story writing and the code, you might need a proofreader to make sure everything you write in your game is well-structured and grammatically correct.

i have a friend that passionate enough to be in a project as a proofreader, if you happen to have a Facebook, you might consider to talk to the guy

by his permission, i'll share his FB account here so you can reach him if you interested on having a proofreader :

https://www.facebook.com/draqanar.raitannil?comment_id=Y29tbWVudDo5MzM2NTU5MjQ1M...

All and all, i really wish for future update and having another amazing improvement in your project

你会说中文吗？

The game looking amazing so far, but i played on smartphone and the android version is a bit mess

My personal review 'w' (Sorry if my English kinda sucks):

I played this game when it was in a much earlier build and hadn't been reworked and I think the game has very good potential to be good! It's a shame that Lentera isn't as popular or as well known as other RPGs like Tavern of Spear. But hopefully as time goes on when you get more content you'll find more ways to advertise your game and have a bigger community.

With that said I will split my review into sections (Don't take my review to heart and if you disagree then all goods! I would just like to add some personal suggestions):

CONS:

Character development - I feel as though the main character becomes way too well acquainted with both Rugra and Rex. Literally at the beginning Rugra does a very big favor for the main character and continues to be very helpful despite not having any bond or connection with the main character. (It does make Rugra very cute, adorable and caring which I really like though lol) However, it  feels as though Rugra is assuming that the main character from the beginning is a very good boi and his care doesn't feel earnt. The main character also lusts for Rugra and Rex very fast too lol. I would like to see the main character lust for Rugra and Rex but as time goes on they delve into a deeper relationship when they learn secrets about each other. I feel it would be better than faking the whole bond to become best buds off the bat as we as the player have not connected with both Rugra and Rex yet. (I understand not much content with them has been created yet so you still have a lot of room to make a good relationship 'w'!)

Story - Overall, it feels as though the main character isn't really encountering any overarching problems. He has: Free food, a free room, free gear to defend himself with, and free hot daddies. The only problem I can see is that the main character lost his memories but I feel as though he doesn't really have a background and was intended to be this way for the player to immerse themselves into the main character (which can be a good thing!) but from a narrative standpoint the story may become flat if nothing much goes on as the player doesn't have many questions to ask or any mysteries to uncover. I'm not exactly sure what to suggest to add to the story but all I would say is add some more conflict / have consequences to the player's actions (e.g The main character gets tricked by a sexy hunk to go steal valuables for him by pretending to own those valuables and if the main character doesn't have enough agility they get locked into jail or something like that) (and I think the conflict with Rex and the guards is a good start 'w' I think it'd be good to incorporate stat blocks to certain interactions like for example you need 10 intelligence to find out what's on Rex's mind)

Combat - This is what the player will be doing most of the time and the player's stats revolve mainly around combat too and the combat just feels pretty lackluster. When you do an attack you get no SFX or Anim showing you did this attack and it was like this in the previous unreworked build too. Even status effects don't really have any visual indicator. But I do get that the game is still in a very early state but I'd like to see more things to give combat more flair like: Adding quick time events, SFX for special moves, Attack animations, Camera shaking from getting hit, Special screens when inflicted with status effects (e.g red slime being stuck on the screen, red streaks and warning sound when low health), Character expressions when low or very horny during battle. All of these added up can really improve the combat aspect of the game even though they seem small. On an additional note: I would like to see more fun mechanics like special puzzles you can do in the dungeons or special stat requirements that lead to treasure or secret endings. So far the dungeons just feel kind of bland as there really isn't much to do there but fight. There is no hidden lore or secrets or special items you can use that you've found to open up hidden parts of the dungeon. It's just kill the enemies then kill the boss and you're done which I don't find very fun but given some time and tweaking it can become fun! 'w'

PROS:

Character Designs / Art - Wow, the art is really good! I really like the character designs (especially Rugra because he's really cute) and I'm happy that the characters are buff too lol. The art isn't the best in the world but it does the job well and I like the pec close up drawings lol. The only thing I would suggest is more facial expressions. I want to have Rugra show more emotions. Have him be confused, conflicted, surprised by your horny remarks etc. All of these add flavor and cuteness to your characters and so far I haven't seen many expressions but it's all good!

Game Overs - You nailed the game overs really well. I definitely love the slime game overs. They are my favorite! 'w' The art is very good and the writing for these scenes is really good as well. I hope to see more hypnosis and slime related content in the future! No suggestions this time just keep doing what you've been doing!

Additional suggestions - I would like to see the main character face more stakes in the story. I find that if the situation has high stakes the better the game over will be. For example: Say a bandit leader has kidnapped Rugra and it's the main character's job to save him from getting indoctrinated into becoming a bandit before a certain time frame. However, the player is underleveled and cannot save Rugra right away or needs to do some prequisites to find him (e.g gathering clues as to where the bandit's hideout is via. hiding in a certain spot at a certain time of day) and if the player fails to save Rugra before the deadline then the newly indoctrinated bandit Rugra will kidnap the main character and also make him a bandit. I just find making use of the time system could make for a more interesting situation 'w'

Thank you if you read my whole review 'w' 

Tome of Fireball cannot be accurately equipped in Android build, an exception is thrown citing no image look up pathway. Same type of error as flirting with slime

when i try using flirt on a red slime an error occures that i could find an image u'char/redslime s1.png

any way to fix that besides avoiding flirting with the slimes?

any guide on transferring saved data without messing up the event page? 

My old save had the last winter equipment from version 1.0. It would be unfortunate  if I had to start over and lose all of them.  

No android .3.

Please remove the comments where the MC states he's not into men at the beginning of the game. I can't appreciate the game with such horrendous statement that negs the main audience of this game. Once thats fixed I can fully support this game.

Did I download the wrong version? There seems to be a lot of content I'm missing since the story ends after Rexile runs off. Am I missing something or is the most recent version simply not on Itch yet?

Is there  any thing to do besides fighting the slimes? (Not in a rude way) I just havent encountered any other mobs .

when is the next update?

I remember this game!!! I have the old version but it sudently vanished when i was going to install it on my new phone, i looked for it in Twitter, Discord and there was nothing. So glad its back, exited to see the new things and the things that changed!!!